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- Haiku X 372 - waterfall veil - shaped haiku 3 -

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Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/15/2025 12:11:00 PM Whether they be small or great, we enjoy the stimuli effect! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/9/2025 9:37:00 AM Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Aren't waterfalls beautiful. Sara K Login to Reply

I Am Anaya Date: 8/9/2025 9:29:00 AM Congratulations on your placement on this most inspirational illuku. You've captured its flow, Anne-Lise. xhugs Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 8/8/2025 12:05:00 AM Your artwork of the waterfall and the image match so well. Congratulations, dear Anne. Hugs. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/8/2025 2:05:00 AM - Thank you very much for your comment and congratulations, Valsa :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/7/2025 11:22:00 AM WOW!!! What a creative/fun write and shape you have here. Love the pretty picture. "Good Luck" Hugs... Have a fun day writing away.......... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/7/2025 12:45:00 PM - Contest results "Honorable Mention" on my entry, Paula - Thank you :) - hugs

Jay Narain Date: 8/7/2025 10:37:00 AM Great haiku with beautiful waterfall picture. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/7/2025 12:40:00 PM - Thank you, Jay :) - hugs

Sotto Poet Date: 8/7/2025 9:38:00 AM The haiku's lyrical description of the waterfall is spot on. Additionally, it conveys powerful feelings and images,  Anne-Lise. It will place high, no doubt. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/7/2025 10:18:00 AM - It "only" got Honorable Mention, Las ... thanks for your encouraging words :) - hugs

Yann Rolland Date: 8/7/2025 2:45:00 AM the poem works very well i sounds and visual, great emotions, thanks anne lise Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/7/2025 7:06:00 AM - Thank you very much, Yann :) - hugs

Rowena Velasco Date: 8/7/2025 1:46:00 AM Congratulations! This haiku cascades beautifully—just like the waterfall it describes. The shift to “stimuli effect” in the third line adds a refreshing, almost scientific resonance that deepens the imagery. Stunning work! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/7/2025 7:05:00 AM - Thank you very much for your comment and congratulations, Rowena :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar Date: 8/7/2025 1:18:00 AM A haiku in art form. So very well done. Brian will be pleased. Hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/7/2025 1:31:00 AM - Brian wasn't too pleased, Victor :))) - hugs

Connie Pachecho Date: 8/6/2025 10:27:00 PM (._HI____) (.O O) (. ^ ) ( <> ) ( ) ( ) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/7/2025 1:33:00 AM - @.. @ ++ @ ( ///\\\ - thanks, Connie :) - hugs Connie Pachecho Date: 8/6/2025 10:28:00 PM lise, nice poem and art

Abdullah Alhemaidy Date: 8/6/2025 2:02:00 PM lookalike storm! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/7/2025 1:34:00 AM - Storm in a glass of water, A.A. :))) - hugs

Joe Dimino Date: 8/6/2025 1:41:00 PM I like it! Very complex though, can't imagine myself even attempting to create such a work. Don't think that I could. Inspirational. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/7/2025 1:35:00 AM - Sure you can... thanks for your comment, Joe :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/6/2025 1:10:00 PM very interesting all these shapes you used. I am so bad at it!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/6/2025 1:28:00 PM - In my opinion, haiku should not be written in shape form... (only for the contest, Andrea :) - hugs