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---Spears Sing of Spring

spears sing of spring push past rag-tag laggard snow--- trumpet the sun

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/7/2012 3:39:00 PM

beautiful....pd

Kash Poet

Date: 3/11/2011 7:55:00 AM

Congrats Debbie on your big win in the contest!--kashinath

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/10/2011 3:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Elaine George

Date: 3/10/2011 11:58:00 AM

Simply beautiful, Deb. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/10/2011 9:16:00 AM

The second line is quite witty, Deb. Enjoyed this. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/10/2011 6:10:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in my contest Debbie. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/10/2011 12:05:00 AM

many congrats dear friend.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/9/2011 7:59:00 PM

Enjoyed the rag-tag snow..congrats on your big win. BG

Ray Dillard

Date: 3/9/2011 6:04:00 PM

Congratulations to you, Debbie. RAY

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/9/2011 5:03:00 PM

love that second line, congratulations to you Debbie

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/9/2011 3:44:00 PM

iIliked this the first time I read it. Congratualtions on your second place. Love, Joyce

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/9/2011 3:41:00 PM

How clever are you......including a sneaky little rhyme within the poem, without compromising the true haiku in you!!!! Kuddos to you !!! :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/9/2011 2:35:00 PM

the sun trumpets: CONGRATS for the fine win, lights... fantastic write and great use of language..:) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/9/2011 2:19:00 PM

Congrats Debbie on another top ten winning poem in Carol's contest .. wonderfully expressive lines luv.. enjoy...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2011 1:56:00 PM

that last line was COOLIO!! Makes me think of those trumpet flowers! congrats, Deb.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/9/2011 1:49:00 PM

Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Carol, Debbie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/7/2011 11:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning poem in Chris's contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/6/2011 3:26:00 PM

Deb, congratulations on taking first place!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/6/2011 1:09:00 PM

Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Chris, Debbie

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/6/2011 7:58:00 AM

Yahoo for you! ...the perfect haiku!! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/6/2011 6:34:00 AM

Congrats Debbie on your first place win in the Alliteration Haiku contest with this stunning selection ... enjoy everso luv..

Kash Poet

Date: 3/6/2011 5:23:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku.Congrats Debbie on your 1st place win----kashinath

Elaine George

Date: 3/6/2011 5:18:00 AM

Gorgeous! Deb. Many congrat's on your FIRST PLACE win. Lainie.

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/6/2011 4:32:00 AM

Many heartiest congrats Debbie for this super win for this awesome haiku. Thanks for your comments. meant a lot.

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/6/2011 1:29:00 AM

worthy winner, such a gem, congrats. Harry