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THE BLACK ROCK PART TWO


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THE BLACK ROCK PART 2.

A Short Story
by James Edward Lee Sr.

Quiet!

Black

Blackness everywhere?

Darken quietness!

Yet the heavens rage and roar. Just what is this? Ravaged explosions shine across the heavenly spheres

Black

Blackness

Dark

Darkness surrounds the vast…….

Generous God the Father....

God the Father looked at the solid torch in his hands and felt calm.

He walked over to the window and reflected on his beautiful surroundings. He had always loved picturesque Dunia with its lonely, large land. It was a place that encouraged his tendency to feel calm.

Then He saw something in the distance, or rather someone. It was the figure of mineral solid. Mineral was a wild god an angel with dirty hands and black eye.

God gulped. He glanced at his own reflection. He was a generous, gracious, manna drinker with solid hands and vast eyes. His fellow angels saw Him as an alive, annoyed creator. Once, He had even revived a dying, human what you say?

God the Father is a strong, stunning and gracious fishmonger from heaven. His life is going everywhere until He creates Human Kind, a thin, tall man with a passion for life.

A spiritual being liken Him and the angels

God takes an instant disliking to Human and the sinister and brutal ways he learnt during his years in earth.

However, when a snake tries to rob Human, God springs to the rescue. God begins to notices that Human is actually rather remarkable at heart.

But, the pressures of Human's job as a being leaves him blind to God's affections and God takes up to try an distract himself.

Finally, when proud navigator, Satan, threatens to come between them, Man has to act fast. But will they ever find the important love that they deserve?

But not even a generous God, who had once revived a dying, human, was prepared for what mineral had in store today.

The rain hammered like awakening snake, making God blacken.

As God stepped outside and Mineral came closer, he could see the nosy smile on his face.

Mineral gazed with the affection of a hopeful lion ready to pounds on his prey. He said, in hushed tones, "I love you and I want life."

God looked back, even more blacken and still fingering the solid torch. "Mineral, I am your Creator," he replied.

They looked at each other with dark feelings, like two fat, frail fish blackening at a very hungry creation, which had playing in the background and two sympathetic uncles loving to the beat.

God regarded Mineral's dirty hand and black eye. "I feel the same way!" revealed God with a delighted grin.

Lightening struck light shown in the dark. The lands still black yet the air the skies open up light-up. Blue tints yellowy orange hints.

Moisture in the air it starts to rain, angels crying…

Mineral looked distance, his emotions blushing like a roasted, rainy rock.

Then Mineral came inside for a nice drink of manna. Who is this snake this serpent of whom you have created and why does he sing so beautifully…..

THE END part 2


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