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10/24/2016 7:05:15 PM
Entering a poem in the "high critique" section	I am having trouble with getting my poem onto the high critique portion of the forum page. Every time I do it, the spacing is wrong and it's one, big, jumbled mess. Do I just have a crappy computer? Is there some hidden and magical way to do this and I'm missing it? Thanks to anyone who can assist me.
12/12/2016 2:13:56 AM
One of my personal favorites, but not so with PS.	Mere Combat in the Crucible In front of the vestibule the dragon slumbers Atop a skeletal heap of unfathomable numbers Like the despair that guards my fatigued core Surrounded by the ruin of all that I implore Beside the parlor bearing my unadorned diadem Broods a scorned and jealous leviathan As the scarab pushes the sun across the sky My worry andanxiety continue to ramify The imprisoned kraken waits with ominous patience Beneath the bedrock and the foundations The primeval serpent slithers around the apple of my eye As my vigor wanes and my dread intensifies However, I will never yield, I will fight forever, with my sword, with my shield I reach for Excalibur, I reach for Mjolnir, I reach for Moses' Rod And I summon the power that comes only from the true God I wrestle my demons, I fight my fiends, and I clash with my foes And I reclaim back from their greedy tendrils my hard-won repose Thus is the plight of recovery With each new height and discovery Comes a new battle to wage That I might enter my "golden age"
12/22/2016 8:34:24 PM
One of my personal favorites, but not so with PS.	Thank you Doug, I will take your ideas to heart.
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