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3/28/2017 4:13:24 PM
Any one tell if this is ok ?	Immortal Love Perchance I spied across the stars, the lonely heart of distant mars. I heard the song so sweet and true, and know alas it came from you. Mine heart it cried from deep within, the beat, the thump, the mighty din. Your name forever stamped on my heart, My immortal love we shalln't part. I tried to sing to call your name , no ears can hear I'll go insane. My roars, my fears, my heart, my soul, Shall die before my body's toll. But here now my heart with in, Shall listen to the distant din. And want like all true lovers do, My immortal love so sweet and true. You may not hear me call your name, Your eyes may never see me again. but the stars in the night brightly shine, I know once again thy shall be mine. I hear Mars song,singing her way, and hope you hear what I have to say. This is a love so rare and true, My immortal love i give to you. edited by daffydreamer on 3/28/2017
3/28/2017 4:15:03 PM
Any one tell if this is ok ?	sorry have no idea how to set the poem as just copied and pasted and this is how it came out sorry
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