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gegreene
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2/27/2019 6:46:33 AM
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looking for honest criticism on short poem
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I'm not sure what "over" means. Either completed and no more or over as in many more?
The next to last line seems unnecessary to me.
Other than these 2 thing, the thoughts are powerfully expressed and well done.
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