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2/25/2016 5:46:00 PM
Howdy. My name is Jolene, but many call me Jo.	I wrote poetry in junior high and high school, then stopped abruptly after a harsh criticism for approximately 15 to 20 years. It seems I have picked up the pen again since the 10th of December 2015. I have some health issues and find it a good way to cope. When I post poems will there be a digital copy right added automatically, or do I need to add a notation. I assume I do retain copyright. edited by Jmc86850 on 2/25/2016 edited by Jmc86850 on 2/25/2016
2/27/2016 4:04:12 AM
Feedback on my poem	Heart has been posted to my account. Its sequel Together should be posted in a day or two. Constructive criticism appreciated. Thank you. Jolene / Jo Please, any feedback is appreciated. Positive or constructive. edited by Jmc86850 on 2/27/2016
2/27/2016 5:33:01 AM
How do I thank / respond 2 comments on my poetry?	Have received some feedback on my poetry I would like to thank the person that gave it. How do I do this?
2/27/2016 7:08:43 AM
How do I thank / respond 2 comments on my poetry?	Got it figured out. Thanks, Jo
2/29/2016 6:48:32 AM
Hi, Where I Belong	If you read Where I Belong, please advise on whether or not I should continue to post poetry here. I would still like to be considered part of this group, at least occasionally. edited by Jmc86850 on 2/29/2016
3/5/2016 7:09:24 AM
monotetra collaboration anyone?	didn't see monotetra in the glossary, this is my understanding of the form the number of stanza is unlimited each stanza has four lines all four lines rhyme with each other each line has eight syllables the fourth line of each stanza is composed of 4 syllables followed by the identical 4 syllables She swirls the stars and spits the breeze Sound the charge, celestial armies Raise her banner o'er land and seas Did she say please? Did she say please? your turn
3/5/2016 3:54:04 PM
monotetra collaboration anyone?	Her strength, a gift from up above And when this world would push and shove She wears God's peace just like a glove She knows God's love! She knows God love! edited by Jmc86850 on 3/5/2016
3/6/2016 4:13:45 PM
Howdy. My name is Jolene, but many call me Jo.	Thank-you much, Michael. -- Jo
3/7/2016 12:10:46 PM
monotetra collaboration anyone?	Michael loyal seams to be Words sound as if she's royalty Awake! Her curiosity So, who is he? So, who is he?
3/7/2016 2:50:17 PM
monotetra collaboration anyone?	Sweet words still fall from his lip Safe embrace might the scales tip Sin, not her desire; dance, spin, dip Time slowly slip, Time slowly slip.
3/7/2016 4:35:32 PM
monotetra collaboration anyone?	Chaste is she, though forty's near The next words she does speak in fear Cry of infant she'll never hear Might adopt, dear; might adopt, dear
3/7/2016 5:07:40 PM
monotetra collaboration anyone?	To nurture children she does want Her illness shared with child would haunt Recent surgery not to flaunt She means no taunt, she means no taunt
3/7/2016 5:45:08 PM
monotetra collaboration anyone?	His sweetest words her fears release They too have brought much needed peace Decisions not whim or caprice His joy increase, his joy increase edited by Jmc86850 on 3/7/2016
3/7/2016 6:25:46 PM
monotetra collaboration anyone?	Appears our thread has grown some eyes Earthly ones, not those in the skies The number of views on the rise Our words disguise? Our words disguise? or e-mail/IM
3/7/2016 7:44:55 PM
monotetra collaboration anyone?	Not sure where there's a disconnect Just thought don't need audience
3/8/2016 6:30:27 PM
monotetra collaboration anyone?	In that case I will testify Long for one who a knot will tie Not to be alone when I die Hope, do not fly; hope, do not fly.
3/8/2016 8:51:58 PM
monotetra collaboration anyone?	Oops!! I guess I should rephrase that. He senses my moods. Who? My cat. When life is tough, with me he's sat. His head I'll pat! His head i'll pat!
3/9/2016 12:36:16 PM
monotetra collaboration anyone?	Max was saved from his abuser (Loved him so won't call him loser) In my care Max has grown older And much sweeter. And much sweeter.
3/9/2016 6:53:06 PM
monotetra collaboration anyone?	If I continue on this thought Painful mem'ries will be my lot But tomorrow I may be taught Time can't be bought! Time can't be bought!
3/10/2016 7:46:21 AM
monotetra collaboration anyone?	Time to let God's healing power Increase in my heart every hour Roses bloom, God made each flower Brave don't cower! Brave don't cower!
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