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9/20/2012 7:28:23 AM
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Magical Friend
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Friends have always come and gone,
Not one has been through it all,
They say if you make it out with one best friend,
You must be very magical
With different phases, there's new faces,
Some brought laughter, some disgraces,
For those that are worth the fight,
keep them close,
It's those for you they'd love and die,
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9/20/2012 9:55:20 PM
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Crazy Ghost
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Unless you've only got one,
Both your eyes see these words,
Are you really understanding them,
Or are they just a bunch of lettersthat make you bored?
If you're still looking then I've gotyour attention,
That's all I ask despite myimperfections,
But you don't even know about these,
I've never shown you myself,
I'm meeting you, these letters are ahuge help
How old am I?
What's the reason I'm asking this? Why?
There isn't one, does there need to be?
This is all just for fun, for you andme.
If I still have your attention thenyour a trooped.
I've rambled on for 15 lines and yourstill reading,
This is how craziness is defined
Just call me, um, the crazy ghost,
The invisible person you talk to whenyour doors are closed.
Nice to meet you,
I hope you sleep well as I do!
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9/28/2012 4:39:44 AM
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My Love - Poem Type, Suggestions
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Aww..this is so cute! Glad you found love, this made me smile ))
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9/28/2012 4:40:51 AM
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Posting a poem for critique
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I found your poem under Gentle Critique. Maybe you've already solved this problem..heheh I enjoyed you writing by the way!
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9/28/2012 4:42:20 AM
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hello community
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Of course! It's always nice to find motivated, driven people that are following their passion Im glad you've joined!
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9/28/2012 7:32:45 AM
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Battle
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Why these battles present themselves?Unknown...
Out of my control,
Gotta let it roll,
What can I do?
Be honest and true,
Sometimes doesn't seem right,
Comes day by day,
Learning which ones to fight,
That's the trick
Dwell on the wrong,
Or concentrate on the good,
Have faith in your choices,
All will be mellow in the hood
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9/28/2012 7:33:12 AM
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CONTROL
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Cant do everything
Overcome resistance to help
Need love
Thank people
Reward good deeds
Own imperfections
Let yourself make mistakes
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9/29/2012 10:14:20 PM
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Breaking Even Steven
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Vendors ready,
About an hour til start,
Year plus of prep,
It's no walk in the park
Creative drive in full speed,
Every situation plants a seed,
Networking channel in high demand,
Without it small guys fall in quicksand
Alive with the childhood glow
Proud of their fleets, it's shows,
Displays plotted to attract consumers
One showcase highlights Honeymooners,
The goal is to break even,
There's no instructions on playing thisgame Steven
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9/30/2012 12:13:50 AM
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ACCOUNTABILITY rookie
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Assume you have to ask questions and you
Can mess up. You
Can apologize and make it up by
Offering to help
Understand a problem and
Never pretend to empathize. Just
Treat people right
Ask to hear both sides of a story
Before making one evil, another inheriting all glory
Illustrate what you preach
Learn why things work
Indecisiveness needs to stop, make up your mind
Trials and tribulations will test your character,
Yield happiness and calm, life will be a delight.
Im not used to writing this form. Feedback, feedback, and more feedback!
edited by svlynn18 on 9/30/2012
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9/30/2012 12:29:52 AM
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Tick Tock
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Clock is ticking
I've been thinking,
So many times,
How many truths turned into lies,
On T.V,
On the phone,
On Craigslist,
Billboards on the way home,
People don't want the truth,
They'll back the lie,
Pays more to go back to work,
Than to watch the big guys die
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9/30/2012 12:46:30 AM
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Echoes
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It's buried deep inside me
Feels like know one will ever know,
This ache that starts in my toes,
I'd scream with all my might,
All you'd hear are the echoes
I may smile,
Day by day
Better to be the eagle in the sun
Than drown like a chicken in rain
I thank the above
For pen and paper
Allows me to drain my well
Maybe help someone exfoliate theirshell
edited by svlynn18 on 9/30/2012
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10/1/2012 6:21:25 PM
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Poetry Manuscript
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Ive got quite a few poems posted on here. Doing a cleaning. If someone (more the merrier) would be kind enough to review some of mine and provide thoughts, I'd REALLY appreciate it.
edited by svlynn18 on 10/1/2012
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10/2/2012 4:10:04 PM
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Echoes
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It's not showing Roberts feedback on this page
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10/3/2012 6:17:37 AM
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Until Eternity
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I can imagine hundreds of ways,
I know it can happen at any time,
Dust will take you, part of me will die
When we're together
Having a good time,
I treasure the moments you're at my side
Until eternity begins, I never want to say goodbye
edited by svlynn18 on 10/3/2012
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10/3/2012 8:07:38 AM
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Almost Guilty
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Occasionally I cry
Overwhelming joy
Sadness is deprived
Seems Surreal
I found the real deal
I feel almost guilty
Like it's a steal
Must have been a saint in a past life
I'll soon be lucky enough to be his wife
edited by svlynn18 on 10/3/2012
edited by svlynn18 on 10/3/2012
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10/6/2012 8:43:26 AM
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Forgiveness
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Filled with anger
Or lost hope, can't decide.
Running into you, I'd be back at
Ground zero
In my best interest to let it go, butits
Very difficult when my
Ego gets in the way. I want an apologyfirst,
Nothing else. I don't care if you were to begor plead. It's
Easy to show up and say you've changed.
Somehow I wouldn't believe you
Shows I'm not ready to forgive you
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10/6/2012 8:55:56 AM
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Signs on Lawns
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This month needs to be done,
Campaigning everywhere
Romney sucks, Obama number one
The T.V At Firestone is on, I start tostare,
During commercial break politicianshave lies to declare
Drama Drama more Drama
No wonder people are mad,
Watching this daily, I'd wake up sad
Signs on lawns,
They make us all feel like chess pawns
At least in the game of life you canpass “go”
Guaranteed payday except for inmates ondeath row
The celebrities should bind togetherand buy the country
At least then, we can hear commercialsabout Bounty
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10/6/2012 8:54:37 PM
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Devil's Roar-I made some adjustments
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Talking in the kitchen,
Family is sitting on the counter jokingaround,
One of us feels singled out,
From the counter pulls he you off andyour head meets the grout,
Suddenly you get up, start laughing,and the rest join.
You become possessed and stab him inthe back,
First can't tell what with butsomething with a point,
Suddenly we all become victims ofattack,
You strike over and over until untilhe's on the floor,
You do an uncanny impersonation of thedevil as you roar
Environment has changed and we'resurrounded by strangers,
They had come to witness a comedy showbut now they're in danger,
They all scatter and run for theirlives,
Escaping into fake staircases, walls, afew run just running no where in strides,
Somehow I just stand there, watch ithappen,
No fear in me that I may become part ofthis,
I tell myself I need this info for thetherapist,
No fear that I may be at risk,
Witnessing a demonic demonstration,
You want loved ones to feelintimidation.
Then I woke up..
Glad my reality doesn't get me allchoked up
Childhood memories can be brutal and seem somewhat Faux
I'm learning more and more I have ahard time letting them go
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10/7/2012 1:18:30 AM
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Writers Frizz
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Writing isn't always easy,
Sometimes writing one sentence,
Can trigger thoughts making my mind toobreezy
I'll stop occasionally to look at mypaper..
Reminds me how humidity makes my hairfrizzy
Best when it's late at night,
With no distractions,
My wheels are too tired,
To turn in full action,
My thoughts slow down,
Ahhh, I can relax
Issues that bother me,
Go on paper seamlessly,
Thirty minutes later,
There's a couple stanzas
I either love it or hate it,
Many times,
I just pop the recycle bin lid.
edited by svlynn18 on 10/7/2012
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10/7/2012 7:47:46 AM
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Excuses Excuses
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Excuses Excuses
It's my way of avoiding undesirablework
Allowing me to keep my sanity forbetter uses
Excuses Excuses
People can tell when I use them
I don't care, doesn't stop me
Everyone is guilty of using them
Much easier than hearing the backlash,
Of that one time I decided to be honest
And say “I don't want to do this, I'msorry!”
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