Poetry Forum
Grinningbulldog
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1/6/2012 12:57:10 PM
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What do you think. "Music"
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I like it, the music is what life is about, well next to the expression of poetry and the way we use words. i think that the line "Lyrics speak to me, deep, I'm so alive" is a bit abrupt, would you think if you moved one line around so it wouldn't be so abrupt.
Lyrics speak to me deep inside, makes me feel so alive.
Unless you are going for a certain meter?
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