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Ahmadfoxx
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9/22/2011 12:19:56 PM
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Don't hold back
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This poem can safely be called a free verse. Stanza 1 has too much contrast in rhythm and syllable content thus creating no harmony. This gives a prose-like read to the poem. I hope you aren't rhyming "love" and "shove" in lines 8 & 9. But i like the theme and presentation. Thank you.
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