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12/21/2023 3:40:32 PM
Romina Yaghubi
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And all these voices
They sing along in my head
I hear their shrills
And I hear their screams
They cry out for help
They ask like beggars
But they've come to the wrong place
For there is no triumph to be found in here
There is only a pile of cries
And a pile of lies
And a pile of hopeless loves
Waiting to be spared
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3/4/2024 5:24:46 AM
Robert Rodriguez
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Good job
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