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11/24/2023 8:25:50 PM
mike roberts
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As morning breaks, under the sun's golden drape,
I embark on the path, the day's journey to shape.
The dew on the grass, like tiny orbs of light,
Mirroring the dawn, oh what a sight!
Trees stand tall, their leaves whispering tales,
Of seasons gone by, and what the day entails.
The rustle of leaves, the chirping of a bird,
Nature's symphony, a melody unheard.
A gentle breeze dances, with a playful twirl,
Caressing my face, as around me it swirls.
The scent of the flowers, the freshness of the morn,
A new day, a new journey, a hope reborn.
The path winds ahead, each turn a surprise,
Under the vast, ever-changing skies.
With each step forward, with each moment that unfurls,
Such is the magic, of my morning strolls.
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12/21/2023 3:41:45 PM
Romina Yaghubi
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It is beautiful. Well done
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4/3/2024 8:30:58 PM
Michelle Smith
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What a wonderful way to start your day, and to look at the world with wonder of all the little beauties along the way! 
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