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2/14/2012 2:43:40 PM

saadat tahir
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(to far off isles … to bobon shores… sealed with a kiss)

An angel whispered me.
Said,
all the roses that you see.
Butterflies,
and the ceaseless honey bee.
They,
so happy gay and free,
add,
such color to our world,
on,
these amazing sunny days,
Pray,
you heard what I had to say,
gazing,
out an azure lapping bay,
It’s,
so due jingles of her birthday.
Otherwise,
wouldn’t be a beautiful sunny day,
never,
Until she graced this worldly way.
You!
Tender and gorgeous dreamy babe,
Always,
giggle and tell me to behave.

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saadat tahir
14 Feb - 2k12
Islamabad.

S’she knows….S’she smiles!
edited by saadat tahir on 2/14/2012

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