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1/17/2022 8:57:46 AM

Constantinos Dino Doonan
Posts: 5

How dare you touch my bride,
Do you not know who I am?
My words bring suicide,
I am a dangerous dagger,
That will slowly cut your insides out,
If you thought this was a joke,
I will show you to my rope,
Alive you will be through all of this pain,
I will give you the same pain you give me,
Day in, day out of torture, until the last act,
I will cut off your face,
And wear it as my own, perfectly sewn,
Do you think she’ll love me more?
Or do you think I'll be out the door?
Only time will tell so keep crying from my well,
Don’t worry no one will hear you yell,
I will putrefy your remains under my floor,
It will be the perfect scent for settling our score,
Maybe next time choose a different whore.

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