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1/8/2022 6:35:42 AM

Bob Atkinson
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an Gorta Mór,


The Great Hunger

(Irish Potato Famine)




by Bob Atkinson



they grew crops of quality

with toil of many days

food meant for bellies

living leagues away




beef cattle grazed

on best pasture lands

feeding those across

a water body’s span




tenant farmers paying

for their privileged status

of unpaid slave to owners

hard work to every manor




a million died of starvation

when potato crops did fail

all the while grain and beef

hurried across trade’s trail




millions emigrated to

countries where could find

a chance to be respected

as if the human kind

took a long and winding road
with disrespect here also shown
for everybody in their time
from the bottom has to climb
edited by Bob_Atkinson on 1/18/2022
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