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1/30/2012 3:55:25 PM
Jim Brewer
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Terribly confusing with sentences which appear to have missing words. I read it twice and felt the poem was rambling at best, a mish-mash of words that had no focus, no re-write; felt like a rushed poem that the poet should have set aside and then re-read with the intent to make it better and erase every word not needed.
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