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7/22/2021 4:27:58 AM Bello Zakariyau Posts: 6	Her head feels light, mybreath draws deeper than herthoughts are heavy and my heart pounds same. Herpupils dilate. So for sure, mymind is fully submerged, as herwhole body floats to mine.My soul found a mate and I'm truly hers.
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11/18/2021 12:24:42 AM Jennifer Ortega Posts: 9	Thank you for sharing your ideas. Here I have learned a lot of things from this post and appreciate your innovative thinking.
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11/22/2021 2:05:48 AM Eduardo Richardson Posts: 65	great text, I really like the form of writing.
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3/31/2022 8:13:19 PM Dave Collins Posts: 13	Just some suggestions Her soft head feels light on my breath, she draws deeper into her soul thoughts which lay heart heavy on each beat of my love. As our pupil's duel dilate, our minds are fully love submerged; our bodies slowly integrate into a floating envelope of benevolent encircling stamp of soulful delivery. We are one in love's delivery.
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