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12/4/2020 1:11:31 PM

Cameron Reid
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Emily's Song

by Cameron Reid



And all at once
the light shone through –
A shining blaze
of golden hue –
A light of hope –
The darkness gone –
A light that proved
the day had won –
As earth had turned
once more around –
And beasts of night
Not to be found –
A nation woke
from pleasant sleep –
And ‘round the globe
they’re counting sheep.
edited by Iraeus on 12/4/2020
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