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2/26/2020 11:06:33 PM Bob Atkinson Posts: 294	Toleration by Bob Atkinson Pierre (Bayle) believed in absolute simplicity in this world no dictatorial attitude to make mankind serve serve those in current power a used religious ritual to hypnotize one’s trust and compromise one's principles or politicians using media for hypnosis of the weak lies, deceptions thrown upon us like truth without much meat an inquisition designed to enslave masses toward a deity which may or not lie absolute in formal competitive history with others of a like purpose who chose a different master a wicked search for simple power which results always in disaster take arguments with great caution for those methods procreated within the minds of mortal men have caused humanity’s enslavement “…kill you if you don’t agree in our method for distrust of anyone who doesn’t follow our plan for life’s engulfment ...” “…torture those who don’t believe? well that’s not an immoral act we’ll kill you hands down for non-belief as we the righteous react….” inquisition was a tool to gather wealth not earned merely confiscated with violence like with taxes our lives burned with promises never kept as only promises are free everything else needs repayment usually by loss of freedom they react to those who don’t believe in what elite espouses unbelievers branded as dirty souls so rational argument’s abandoned what an absurd form of organization to be immoral when one condemns opposition with such aviolent hand we as true believers where belief wasn’t real found adherence to a plan brought to us with so much zeal wow, these represent pseudo-truths of those who would gain power over fellow men with immorality shot like an arrow sounds like current politics? ‘tis only repeat of rotten tactics professed by religious orders which never showed who their master a group of elite men who found with ritual hypnosis anything desiredto be at hand in their power hungry process thank goodness people now see how this process repeats its folly a simple solution to evolution let not our minds be turned to jelly let not us be lied to again as in humanity’s past where enslavement by government and religion wasn’t by chance was deviousness of elites who shoved these ideals down our throats into our hearts and threw away moral enhancement or advancement of the soul of man to where civilization could be claimed while now we fight our brothers because of morality drained drained by those whose fictions devise plans to enslave us in our beds keeping freedom from progressing with nonsense shoved into our heads edited by Bob_Atkinson on 5/2/2023
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2/20/2022 9:52:04 PM Bob Atkinson Posts: 294	Think about Canada when you read this poem.
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