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1/27/2020 3:17:48 PM
Ash Dawes Posts: 1
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Me: Arms open wide, Bracing for impact. Hoping for that leap Of faith. You: Hesitant to cross The great divide. Calculating the distance Between hope and safety. Us: Translating our fears Into a language we both understand. Holding hands as we Walk along the high wire. edited by AshleyDawes963 on 1/27/2020
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2/1/2020 12:02:16 AM
Jack Webster Posts: 255
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Have you considered using the image of Flying Trapeze instead of High Wire?
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