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2/25/2019 3:39:20 AM
Sanja Cokolic Posts: 13
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What I felt when I looked at you
a life sized to daily care which does not occur regularly nor properly
they don't care
It's just a mere fulfillment of inflicted patterns pushing you to die through those papers
(don't sign them)
they've inserted your heart in a metal cage and corrosion imprinted soul making voice reek like rust
through the flesh desiccated branches ramify bones have become autumn but eyes somehow assured the summer to stay
so captured light can cut approaching clouds like laser and darkness won't shade your resting while you're painting that dream of a house settled by the dalmatian coast
your sea is calling for you
I saw you leaving
wanting to scream kept my mouth shut
didn't know how to hand you over that life jacket as deluded sentences were decomposing your chest cavity so you kept navigating that river of perverted past throwing paper boats filled with fury and indictments
you were that autoimmune one
there is a green color groveling across your face and it doesn't bring the spring
muscles are winter drained and dormant
I tried to wake them up by rubbing that oil through your suffocated pores
no one came to see you so they clogged
and you kept calling for mother while your intestines were set on fire
she didn't came
couldn't cry with you as I despise the rain
forgive me
edited by Christina Addison on 2/25/2019 edited by Christina Addison on 2/25/2019
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