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7/15/2018 5:44:10 AM
sand blown
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dreams of rest
that are bequest
good fortunes on the mile
old english (that final wish)
a cause for one to smile
for what hath naught time forgot
but for script of pen on page
from then till now
this time of trick
and dreams of when
(that ads do send)
taken with a smile
these times of old
warm or cold
are debt
but for the while
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