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7/9/2018 9:03:58 AM

SCHYLAR ROSE
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The birth of my princess, the dawn of a fairytale story,
My kingdom complete and basking in God's glory.
Schylar Rose you were named, our happiness, our joy.
A beautiful daughter to us, a little sister to our boy.
Only 995 grams at birth were your weight,
A tiny girl, but in God we had faith.
... But suddenly dysmorphic features were found
Our joy came crashing down!
Admitted into hospital, test after test,
An irregular heartbeat in your chest!
But God's words state, "love drives all fears away"
Therefor we dare not fear, yet life was only expected for days.
Our prayers grew stronger, "God, please protect her through this storm"
God answered "she will go home two months after she was born"
Our little knight seeing for the first time his sister,
"Daddy, I like her" he softly whispered.

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