Poetry Forum
For poets who want unrestricted constructive criticism. This is NOT a vanity workshop. If you do not want your poem seriously critiqued, do not post here. Constructive criticism only. PLEASE Only Post One Poem a Day!!!
6/30/2018 8:51:14 PM
Carissa Marie Posts: 24
|
Tomorrow tastes like broken hearts Pickling in a Las Vegas casino
One more card For shame But the dog is at home with fleas And there's no work on Saturdays
No play either Just roomfuls of laundry And an eviction notice
Drunken crying counts as a disturbance
Bras don't hang on doorknobs Or even women for that matter It's a cold, lonely kitchen And the forks are all rusted
Two in the morning No windows The man a chair over Just took off his wedding band And the barmaid stopped refills
|
• permalink
• reply with quote
|
Powered by AspNetForum
6.6.0.0
© 2006-2010 Jitbit Software