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5/18/2018 4:46:59 AM

Lucia Siwela
Posts: 3
Starring into nothingness
Overwhelmed by confusion
Emptyness so terrifying
Thoughts wondering through the darkness
Emotions scattered everywhere
Shadows peeping for some light
I'm captured in my own thoughts
Imprisoned by ever-changing emotions
So much happening all at once
But nothing makes sense
How do I escape such darkness
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