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3/3/2018 4:11:46 AM

Itumeleng Nyakatya
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Stares at a distance
Eyes cross paths
One look at you
One look at me
The stare is filled with wonder
But I still love the tan on my knuckle
You still wearing the smile he gave you
Promise I cannot break
And you still stand besides your half
It is human to err
But I am for her as you are for him
'Cause as I blink,
I'm still fighting this temptation
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