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1/12/2018 7:48:31 AM

Joe Nguyen
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How Wonderful it is

How wonderful it is,
When I find your love
Bird swimming
Fish flying
Sun rising on my shoulders
And on the rolling clouds, Flowers blooming.

How wonderful it is,
When my heart filled with your blessings
Earth rejoicing
Air chanting
Life praising.

How wonderful it is,
When You are my dreams
And all my thoughts are full of your mercy
For, your compassion fills my world
Ev'ryday I sing your glory.

How wonderful it is,
When You are my life
My whole life is thirsting for You, above
Thanks be to You, my sweet Lord Jesus Christ
Sprinkle my life, please, with your eternal love.

How wonderful when my life rests in your caring hands.
How wonderful when I'm one of your children.
How wonderful when You are with me, always.
And how wonderful I am your lowly servant.

Joe Hung Nguyen

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