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1/7/2018 1:28:22 PM

Raji Malla
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Sometimes you have to be re-born, dissolving your good and bad into the time that’s going to pass anyway.

The corpses you are carrying are meant to be buried. They are empty of life anyway.

Entify your dream that holds up your purpose. It was never a fantasy anyway.

Fall again and rise again. That’s how the Sun does it anyway.

Look out for a brace in need. No man could ever make it unescorted anyway.

Overpower your fears and crack your doubts. They are alone standing in your way.

You can only live now and try now. Tomorrow is dubious anyway.

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