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8/20/2017 8:27:14 AM
victoria ter
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I was just looking at the sunsent and had an urge to write something down. This is what I came up with in a few seconds.
The flaming sun just drowned in azure.
It kindly left us some debris of light.
The earth put on a mystical allure.
I looked above and marveled at the sight.
English is not my native language and I am not very familiar with English poetry. I don't even know if my "poem" is good or bad. Should I finish it? Should I forget about poetry?
Critique this please.
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8/22/2017 12:39:55 PM
Dean Wood
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By all means, finish it. It is good. Rhyming every line is more challenging. You could just rhyme the 2nd and 4th lines if you need a little more freedom. This is good, do not quit!
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