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7/30/2017 11:33:39 PM

Heather Cole
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Another Bad Day or Trash

So much hurt inside.
Used and then thrown aside.
Again I did the stupid thing.
Even kept on this silly ring.

For three days I believed the lies.
Can't even come back and look me in the eyes.
Hearing "I will be there in a few.
I promise promise you."

Knife in hand as tears roll down.
Knowing my heart has been let down.
Stupid girl you will never learn.
You are only here to get burned.

Wishing I had my car to help me flee.
Maybe even swerve into a huge tree.
It's easy to think it was me.
There is a neon sign above me.

I hate myself today as it should be.
I don't even deserve to breathe.
Being stupid as always.
Always waiting to be played.

Figures knife is dull.
Just more suffering in my own hell.

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