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7/30/2017 1:32:24 PM
Syn Michele Posts: 2
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Am I losing my mind Am I losing my way I turn my head I must look away Can I keep living a lie When I know truth I need your love, I beg of you Should I feel dismay When other girls catch your eye I can’t have your heart If I don’t have your mind You go astray I pretend not to know How can this go on I must let you go It kills me to go down this road I get left all alone In this house we built made of glass We tried to paint it gold So beautiful on the outside This house of lies Now it feels like a tomb The lies have been so strong Now we are stuck here Wondering where we went wrong Living in a house of gold So beautiful and cold edited by Syn Michele on 7/30/2017 edited by Syn Michele on 7/30/2017
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