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7/11/2017 5:49:47 AM
White Wolf
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The Climax
Elegant frequent interludes
Ebony and ivory harmonized
The maestro raises his hands
A single note from violin
Reverberates the soul within
Piano keys dance the storm
Conductor's baton waves the way
The orchestra now as one
Vibrations pounding in my heart
Sweet cellos and harps sing
Two dueling clarinets take front stage
Silhouetted angels fill the mind
As the beating of timpanis start
A fluttering flute swiftly flies
With dulcet melodies swirling about
A double bass begins the final coda
Then blissfully, I open my eyes
edited by Rick Keeble on 7/11/2017
edited by Rick Keeble on 7/11/2017
edited by Rick Keeble on 7/11/2017
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