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7/10/2017 2:38:33 AM

Oluwatamilore Anthony
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MAWU AMONGST STARSAs a perfect scar, is the morning star,illumed as Hemera asleep and dreamyupon the breasts of Nyx, cold and homey,staring, so stoic in gaze, perfect scar.Of settings and fanta-scenes of my soulshe reminds. Of wild eyes cremating formsand preserving mummies amid ash stormsshe reminds. Of words bleeding from my bowl...Of a plum, all of her engrained for ayshe reminds. Of hopeless fetish withinsowing on my seed bed any seasonShe reminds... of Oyin coming so nigh.As blush fades away, green leaves come alive;the bluish glow with doves, refills my rive.
edited by Babs Anthony on 7/10/2017

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