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6/17/2017 2:26:58 AM
Angga Kusumadinata
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STILL STANDING..... I am still standing here with pain Waiting for you in hope Waiting the answer on your loveI am still walking on your lineTo hope you’ll back to my heart soon, but no blind I miss you all the way you moveI miss you all the craziness you moodI miss you on your loss and win But I want you to win me again Or make it easy to win by me, if you still need my hand Oh... my love, please draw my beautiful dream again And make it come true as our gain. June, 07 – 2017
edited by Anggak1 on 6/17/2017
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