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7/9/2016 10:31:49 PM
Gabe Shelly
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A hundred or more there were...
With their betters they came--
Two then three then six then none--
Never will I be able to stand above him
Never
My Dad
7/9/'16
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7/21/2016 10:22:56 PM
Tom Arnone
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Interesting and touching, Gabe. I wish I understood the meaning. Who are the hundred or more and their betters?
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