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5/24/2016 6:03:56 PM
Ellie Thompson
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*warning bad language*
He's like hot chocolate
On a winters day
All sweetness and warmth
Sends shivers down my spine
When he speaks my name.
Making me tingle all over
But that's just his voice.
His body speaks volumes
Of pure naked poetry
Fills me with an urge
To trace every line
With my tongue
Lapping up every inch of him
**** me I'm whipped for the bleach blonde hot blooded cocky american fucker
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