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11/28/2015 7:16:54 AM Mary Swingler Posts: 4	I want to grow as a poet, which means improving in this artistry. I would appreciate an honest critique of my writing. Please provide details of my weaknesses and if you will, where and how I need to improve. If my poems have any redeeming qualities, I would appreciate a brief mention of this. My first of many poems. Feeling Good Laugh, Giggle, Guffaw Chucking, Tittering, Cackling Joy, Mirth, Cry, Chortle Tearing, Weeping, Sobbing Whiny, Blubber-faced Cachinnate edited by marylou4 on 11/28/2015
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11/28/2015 8:16:18 AM Mary Swingler Posts: 4	apparently it is not worth reading or analyzing.
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11/28/2015 11:33:33 AM Mary Swingler Posts: 4	I apologize for misunderstanding the purpose of this forum.
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