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2/2/2015 10:09:23 PM

Gabe Shelly
Posts: 95 		Emptiness is a void--
Loneliness can fill it--
Darkness too...
A space-filled nothing--
It cannot be enjoyed




1/8/'15
edited by Gabe on 2/2/2015
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2/4/2015 7:48:37 AM

Karah Sullivan
Posts: 1 		I can tell you have pain. Loneliness cannot fill emptiness. Fighting this loneliness.
xoxo
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