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1/15/2011 12:34:01 PM
Trudy Schrader Posts: 3
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They ride around On lightening bolt brooms Trying to keep wild colors Contained in conditioned rooms
They absorb paint In their frames of wood Telling the liquid to be images That are pleasing and good
Outside of the holy walls Colors run unconstrained Passion and evil become one In the life under no restraint
The ungodly paint with sin The faithful color with virgin oil Sinners and Saints Are as different as water and soil
The problem with painting Has nothing to do with color or line Faith and fear are exactly the same In the context of time
The running to and fro Is always guided by a hand Faith frees us to God Fear staples us to man
In the end we know nothing Of the result we longed to possess How disappointing for the framlings Who find their masterpiece has been repossessed
Written by Trudy Schrader some time in 2009
Note: This is the 2nd poem in the breaking down of a concept. It's ok, but the 3rd one is much better. I won't bother with the 1st one...it's hideous.
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