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12/15/2010 12:33:24 PM
jessica thomas
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so many players think i was a bull game but ever man is for themself you will get yours as they will leave. I drank you poison as you told me it was wine i did not mean to give you my heart, my trust from day one players will get theres as you will leave
As I lay here you watch me live my life In Pain you will get
yours as they will leave
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jessica louise thomas
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