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5/10/2010 7:01:01 AM

Robb A. Kopp
Posts: 12
Family breakfast I love the most
Cheese scrambled eggs and jellied toast

By Robb A. Kopp
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5/10/2010 8:32:35 AM

Hi Robb, I enjoyed reading this one, sounds like a lovely breakfast too! My only suggestion is to put a period at the end, thus completing the thought.
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