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11/6/2010 5:38:53 AM
Craig Watson Posts: 4
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Old romantic
I take you by the hand, and lead you down to the bed, 'I love you baby', and you repeat the words I said, I whisper in your ear, just what I'm gonna do, Before this night is over, I'll make your dreams come true.
You didn't have to say it.. 'cause I already knew, But I'll give you what you want for the trouble you've been through, Oh my coo, coo, cha choo, forget stress as I caress you, As I confess that you're the best! And it's just us two.
Time can fly.. I don't care. I can't wait, I hate being without you, and just lately I feel great! Now we're cuddled up together.. forever isn't long, Our passions grow strong.. I love what we've got going on.
'Cause all day long I picture your face, Your eyes and your body, I could never replace. With our souls combined, we can sit back and unwind, And take it one day at a time.
I'm.. dreading the day, when you finally leave, I'm a realist, it's not about what I believe, But I'll survive, I'll live.. I won't die, And no one will ever see the quiet tears that I cry.
However, that's the future.. and this is the now, Forget the past, if you want, I'll show you how. So hold on tight Girl, and go with the flow, You've got a 1st class ticket, VIP, enjoy the show!
I won't ever stop, I won't ever go, You know it sometimes feels like my heart is gonna blow! You're the one, the only, great love of my life, It's just a shame it had to cut me.. like a double edged knife.
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