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2/1/2014 12:14:08 AM
Teresa Lindsay
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Finding one who I knew from beforeNever really seeing the real personKnowing they were always thereReady to step up and in when neededLooking back seeing for the first timeWhat they really meant to meFeeling what I buried deep insideSeeing those feelings returned unconditionallyKnowing what I know now wishing I did thenLost time to make up for, Wrongs to set rightSomething so strong, feels so right.Better now than ever before, So much to doLooking back knowing I had to go throughAll I had before this moment in timeTo get to this point in my life, To see itWe can only move forward and take itDay by day, living in the moment, BreathingWaiting to see where it will leadHoping for forever and a day.
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2/1/2014 12:14:36 AM
Teresa Lindsay
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Be critical as you wish
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