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5/8/2010 7:11:54 PM Michael Benkhen Posts: 40	It isn't bad...I can't think of any flaws... -- The land is littered with the graves of animals I never killed yet somehow mourn.
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5/9/2010 11:45:23 AM Debbie Guzzi Posts: 12	Rosita wrote: Do you think of me When snow falls soft upon you Warming you within? Do you think of me When rain falls hard upon you Washing away pain? Do you think of me When gentle breezes caress Like I think of you? edited by Rosita on 5/8/2010
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5/9/2010 11:48:24 AM Debbie Guzzi Posts: 12	Rosita, I would suggest you think about why you are capitalizing? If there is not a specific reason...like emphasis...I think capitalization is best left for the beginning of a sentence or thought and periods at the end of sentences, as well as, question marks. It's a good topic for a verse!
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