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1/11/2014 2:08:21 AM
James Kelley Posts: 2
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Oasis:
I watched her swim up into the arms of a flickering sunset, mouth open, letting rain fall on a velvet tongue. She was a whisper in the arms of horizon, lightning strikes falling beneath her every stroke. I followed her to the edge, until the weight of muddy shores, stifled my breath and forced my knees unto the Earth. In silence, I devoured the sight, praying for the strength to find my way. -James Kelley 2014, All rights reserved.
-- James Kelley
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1/7/2015 1:31:54 PM
Sarah Muldoon Posts: 2
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I love your descriptions in this poem, the meaning I took from this poem is that love is evolution, I enjoyed the read!
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