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1/1/2014 9:26:26 PM
Gabe Shelly
Posts: 95
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Lady,
You are an angel--
A Beauty as pure as a little girl's tears,
a dog's last loving nuzzle, an old man's cry--
With this pitchfork I play I hum a tune...
And I hope the wind catches it and tells you for I cannot.
For where you go, I will not follow--
I go down, not up
Heather
12/23/'13
edited by Gabe on 1/1/2014
edited by Gabe on 1/1/2014
edited by Gabe on 1/5/2014
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