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7/18/2013 11:31:14 AM
Ako Henshaw Posts: 2
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In the very first start it sounded sweet. Cool! cool! it didn't went every day, events unfolded as we bridged time across. I saw it came to a perfection but was it...... Now the tides have changed, The pretty, beautiful, and came a price One which an angel couldn't have. Hairs stood at ends waking every day.... See the same face at dull lights. Kiss lips of a kind through time bedeviled me.... Waters parade the bridges at my detriments so it's i call marriage in time at the very fist start 'twas sweet but a contempt view go for perfection and pray for redemption.....
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