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6/5/2013 7:14:08 PM
Gabe Shelly
Posts: 95
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This Life I detest
For Happiness only comes in moments now.
We have done so many things...
"But what is bad or good that thinking makes it so..."
Maybe it is I who is changing color--
Still I so want to point the finger
6/1/'13
edited by Gabe on 6/5/2013
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