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5/30/2013 8:40:02 PM

Nato Calubiran
Posts: 23

Across the borders, might be big or small
Bright Galions, ready to destroy with big cannons
Colonizing every country they go
Dead bodies and blood to the seas they flow
Every Filipino stand your ground
For God is with us, in our hearts He's found
God is with us, God is in me

Hallelujah, We keep on singing
Hallelujah, We might die today
Hallelujah, Give us strength we pray

In the end the battle is over
Justice for our Country lovers
Killings and Words to ponder
Love of God, In his arms we're under

My Dual entry.
ABC Poem of Love
(Love of Country, HAHAHAH!!!)
Poems about Nationality

05/30/13

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