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5/21/2013 6:51:04 PM
mitchell eadie
Posts: 6
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Everyone’s an artist,
snug inside their sheets.
Awakened by our sleeping minds,
subconscious finds its feet.
Fragmented dreams when you were young
still linger to this day.
Secluded sunshine waterfalls
shine brightly through the rain.
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